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-The next step is to create a RFS Service to expose this resource. To do so, you may read the [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/) documentation page. 
+We need now to start offering this as-a-Service, ready to be ordered from the Service Catalogue. So, the first step is to create a Resource-Facing-Service (RFS) Specification to expose this resource. To do so, you may read the [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/) documentation page.

 Regarding the RFS Service, you must set the following characteristics:

 - _CR_CHECKVAL_AVAILABLE = RUNNING
 - _CR_CHECK_FIELD = spec.status

-By setting this characteristics, you will rely on the value of `spec.status` to set the service as `active`. Ideally, the operator would have implemented an Operator for this Custom Resource. However, for demonstration purposes, we will use a Supervision rule to set `spec.status` to `RUNNING`
+By setting these characteristics, you will rely on the value of `spec.status` to set the service as `active`. Ideally, the 5G Core provider would have implemented a proper Kubernetes Operator for this Custom Resource to implement the requested QoD. However, as discussed already, for demonstration purposes, we will short-circuit the behavior and we will set `spec.status` to `RUNNING` immediately after deployment.

-Then, you can proceed to create a CFS Service, which will incorporate the just created RFS Service. More information is available at: [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/). To create the CFS Service characteristics, you may use the Service Specification available at `/DummyOperatorService/OSLArtifacts/DummyOperatorService-CFS-Specification.json` . You may manually create the CFS Service, or you may onboard this Service Specification by making a POST request to *[{{url}}/tmf-api/serviceCatalogManagement/v4/serviceSpecification](https://www.notion.so/CAMARAaaS-OSL-15e11fa2ed8d80808254c87d9393cf51?pvs=21).*

-After creating the Service Specification, you should mark this Service as a Bundle. Then, go to “Service Specification Relationships” and add the RFS Service.
+Then, you can proceed to create a Customer-Facing-Service (CFS) Specification, which will incorporate the just created RFS Service. More information is available at: [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/). To create the CFS Service's characteristics, you may use the Service Specification available at `/DummyOperatorService/OSLArtifacts/DummyOperatorService-CFS-Specification.json` . You may manually create the CFS Service, or you may onboard this Service Specification by making a POST request to *[{{url}}/tmf-api/serviceCatalogManagement/v4/serviceSpecification](https://www.notion.so/CAMARAaaS-OSL-15e11fa2ed8d80808254c87d9393cf51?pvs=21).*
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 By setting this characteristics, you will rely on the value of `spec.camaraAPI.status` to set the service as `active`. The previous operator, when it deploys the CAMARA QoD Provisioning API will set that CR field to `RUNNING`.

-Then, you can proceed to create a CFS Service, which will incorporate the just created RFS Service. More information is available at: [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/). To create the CFS Service characteristics, you may use the Service Specification available at `/QoDProvisioningAPI/OSLArtifacts/CAMARAaaS-QoD-Provisioning-API-CFS-Specification.json` . You may manually create the CFS Service, or you may onboard this Service Specification by making a POST request to *[{{url}}/tmf-api/serviceCatalogManagement/v4/serviceSpecification](https://www.notion.so/CAMARAaaS-OSL-15e11fa2ed8d80808254c87d9393cf51?pvs=21).*
+Then, you can proceed to create a CFS Service, which will incorporate the just created RFS Service. More information is available at: [Exposing Kubernetes Operators as a Service : Offering "Calculator as a Service" through OpenSlice](https://osl.etsi.org/documentation/latest/service_design/examples/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/ExposingCRDs_aaS_Example_Calculator/). To create the CFS Service characteristics, you may use the Service Specification available at `/QoDProvisioningAPI/OSLArtifacts/CAMARAaaS-QoD-Provisioning-API-CFS-Specification.json`. You may manually create the CFS Service, or you may onboard this Service Specification by making a POST request to *[{{url}}/tmf-api/serviceCatalogManagement/v4/serviceSpecification](https://www.notion.so/CAMARAaaS-OSL-15e11fa2ed8d80808254c87d9393cf51?pvs=21).*