TFS-HACKFEST-3.md

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 * VISA: Should you require a personal invitation letter for your visa application, please fill in this [Template](uploads/c88977984a31854cfb8159b3407e07bd/TFS_3_Visa_Letter.docx) and send it to Ricard Vilalta ricard.vilalta _-at-_ cttc.es
 
 # Scope
-This Hackfest will be dedicated to the use of P4 in TeraFlowSDN, starting with an overview of TeraFlowSDN and white box management with P4, followed by a gradual walkthrough of an end-to-end P4 based demo, then more interactive sessions led by key members of the TeraFlowSDN community. Participants will be able to build their own hands on experience of P4 forwarding with TeraFlowSDN, including aspects such as deployment, configuration, operation, monitoring, update, etc..
+This Hackfest will be dedicated to the use of P4 in TeraFlowSDN, starting with an overview of TeraFlowSDN and white box management with P4, followed by a gradual walkthrough of an end-to-end P4 based demo, then more interactive sessions led by key members of the TeraFlowSDN community will take place. Participants will be able to build their own hands on experience of P4 forwarding with TeraFlowSDN, including aspects such as deployment, configuration, operation, monitoring, update, etc..
 
 # Prerequisites
 
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 * Participants are expected to:
    * Have user-level knowledge of Linux.
    * Join the [#hackfest3-2023-oct](https://teraflowsdn.slack.com/archives/C05RWF7BZ5K) channel in the [TFS Community Slack Workspace](https://join.slack.com/t/teraflowsdn/shared_invite/zt-18gc5jvkh-1_DEZHFhxeuOqzJZPq\~U\~A)
-  * Prepare their laptop with a clean environment running Linux and Kubernetes. A pre-installed VM will be provided (see Hackfest Material)
+  * Participants will need their laptop, with a Linux and a Kubernetes-based environment installed. You are invited to use the Virtual Machine we provide with pre-installed material (see Hackfest Material) so that you need not to reinstall all your laptop. Even if you already have Linux on your laptop, we recommend preparing a clean working environment based on the VM.
 
 
 # Who should attend
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   - Hands-on exercises on P4 data plane programming
   - Interaction of P4 with TeraFlowSDN
   - First ideas towards in-band network telemetry (INT)
-- Discussion on possible enchantments for the P4 driver of TeraFlowSDN
+- Discussion on possible enhancements for the P4 driver of TeraFlowSDN
   - Introduction to P4-based in-band network telemetry (INT)
   - Call to action
 - Wrap-up Day 2 & end of Hackfest